Original writing

 This Part of the one of the chapters I believe the Aintish join the war is when the Lerthians realise they are being crushed and start panicking this is the original writing that I wrote

Deaths all the sudden and the confusion grew when the main body of Aintish arrived the two sides fought the Lerthians obviously where being defeated they lost half there infantry. The cavalry couldn’t stand up against the Aintish cavalry as the aintish where trained for many years especially the cavalry. They also were armed to the teeth with the best weapons. The Lerthians lost so many men they were forced to retreat there warlord which had been elected to lead them died fighting along with many of there best men .The Lerthain masses retreated having heavy casualties as they retreated Carnet calmly ordered his men to pick where they were and they started advancing into Lerthain territory.