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I wrote this storie 3 years ago                   

The Breakout

It was a bleak winter day, in fall there was a jail in a certain country and in that jail there were 120 women and about 200 men all had gathered in a certain cell bigger than the rest and in the middle of the circle was a man in his 40’s about he was 6 feet exact his name was samuel he looked like he was 20 and a certain woman near him was crying and two other woman were to three men were standing by a stone in the corner the man said in a hoarse whisper the jail break shall be tonight cause behind that stone is a box that has about 156 pistols with powder a bullets that’s not enough for every man here but it will break through the enemy but they have rifles a bayonets that’s okay we're going to get those things soon when we break out when night falls but sir why not go right now it’s dark enough hmmmm.. Yes i think it will work men first then woman soon two men had passed out guns and powder and bullets they began to climb the wall when every man was over they quickly loaded and helped the women over but suddenly samuel saw fifty guards run at them saying halt but three men fired and they made a wall of them and kept firing soon militia men arrived and fought on the other side but the wall on that side fought them also soon the woman got away and then soldiers arrived the men managed to get to the streets and the citizens shrieked in horror some took arms against them soon they reached out of the city and made way for the valley of cortez were they will get military training and get ready for the rest of the battles to come soon came a army fifty citizens who disliked the enemy who took over there country soon they heard a large army headed towards them of 400 they had roughly 300 and they needed more military training but they had to come and fight their enemy soon they were within two miles until there camp 

          The Big Battle

Soon there was boom!!!!! And explosion close to there 3rd position but then there were twenty rifle shots and then another boom!!!!! And soon it was just gunshot after gunshot soon the prisoners warded off there first position of the soldiers but then another body of men charged into the enemy and forced them back two paces but there bullets forced them back again soon there was reinforcements so that forced the prisoners back again the enemy charged again and again but they held strong so that forced the soldiers retreated so the soldiers retreated and there was no hope for that camp they took everything so their camp in the valley looked like a soldier town 275 strong 95 rifles 175 pistols enough for them to destroy the invading army the valley cortez was like a strong castle there were rocks all around the valley with on the side was a forest the other side there were scattered trees on this side it was like a fortress soon to come in handy a day later they heard a battle cry they quickly got there weapons and gathered at a rocky cliff and looked at the army of two hundred men with rifles there captain samuel yes I see that  we will have to fight we now this place better than them l want the men rifles to go to the front lines I will

Lead them to the fight it’s there day or our’s men and I also want the men with pistols to be right behind all men on horseback got to the side for a while till the battle is quit heavy then be our reinforcements to revive us we should be able to defeat them but you must fight on and obey don’t be afraid to shoot just drive them to top of hill then i will shout regroup then we charge again and force them far back into the next valley then we will trap them sir that at green man’s hill sir we have them now charge!!!!! Boom!!!!! Pow pow hundreds of men fired at each other there were men screaming in pain and there were horse’s who screamed in pain also the soldiers were winning but then the horsemen charged in and destroyed the enemy front line but in a second later the enemy charged into the fray again much fiercer and with bayonet they were all getting forced back into the next valley now the next valley had rocky hills so samuel gave the order and they spread out and samuel charged in and made them go up the next valley into there lines the enemy destroyed the other side line and escaped it was horrible that side was slaughtered there were two hundred men in the battle now there were 175 on the prisoner side at the campfire samuel was saying why didn’t you charge we didn’t know we were supposed 

To sir well next time do what I do got it soldier yes sir captain parker captain parker was a fellow that you wouldn’t want to mess with he was muscular and round but for some reason he didn’t eat much 

A little while people talked 6 men came in the camp with rifles and in red uniform everybodylutinenatlutinenatlutinenatlutinenat grabbed a weapon and loaded ready for trouble soon captain parker came to the back with twenty three men so if they did any funny business they would have trouble 

                     The Fight

Soon there was serious talking going on with samuel and three of the men but the other three were talking with two other men armed with pistols while samuel talked he heard a crack and a bang and soon there were three dead soldiers on the ground there captain yelled angrily YOU SAVAGE DOGS!!!!!! Who did this yelled samuel three men stepped out of the thick line of men you men will work till you're back breaks these men didn’t have a chance but sire said one of the men they were raising their guns we just fired in defense sir alright it seems sir’s you will go back with three not six you will pay they drew their swords and rushed the three men fire yelled samuel they did so but they only hit two the other one struck won to pieces the other one shot him well men bury them and send a messenger back saying these spanish men need better temper ratings hahahahahaha!!!!! Said the men one of the men ran to a horse and rode off but the next day he had a sword slash in the back and a bullet holt in the hat they took him in medical care right away soon they attacked with fury and made the to move into the village for safety more men came every day for the prisoners until they had four regiments one was 201 and the other was 90 the other was 100 and the last was 99 it all added to 490 in the evening they raided several times just small raids one got into the city and did a enormous amount  damage lots of men had just went to see if they would give up but there were none who would 

                         The Cave In 

Samuel was marching to his assigned tent one day when the enemy soldiers marched over dead man’s point now it was called that because they had set cannons up and whoever came to  that point was blasted soon there was a constant blow of the cannon soon they left but samuel and the regiment of 100 came with him and they raided the city but this was a pull in a run out they had them pinned down and samuel was not going to give up he gave the order and about 60 rifles blasted part of the wall the enemy soldiers  laughed and scoffed at them but the part of the wall gave way as soon as that gave away samuel blew a horn and the rest of the men came and fought for the castle captain parker was leading charges finally they retreated into the main wall and they conquered what was out in that wall including 30 rifles and all they needed was at least 24 rifles and they found black cloth they were making uniforms for the army some had the uniforms already but most didn’t soon they headed back to the camp and slepped all night the next day there was a knock on the post and two soldiers came in sir we’ve spotted a enemy army headed this way hmmmm….. Let’s give them a hand with all those things that they carry shall we george yes sir get the men to gather at the green {the green is place to train} soon all 490 men arrived but the count went up only 465 men the captain samuel said that must be the men that died in battle the men took of there black hats and prayed and soon they were marching of three captains one commander soon the enemy was in sight and they fired a volley but soon after they fired they had 500 men down there and only 465 men here captain samuel hoped for the horse men to help them soon know after there volley the prisoner’s horsemen rode out they shouted and fired and rode in out of them stealing baynet and there sacks soon they were gone they were reatreting two the farther valley we can force them there charge 465 men poured through gaps and holes in all the rocks the soldier’s fired as fast as they could but they couldn’t force captain samuel away and they quickly gave up they gave everything away and now there was nothing left of 50’th Maryland but there were still 300 men plus 50 militia men they had to fight it wasn’t over yet

                        The Town

Soon the enemy heard of there fellow comrades and quickly got ready for the siege they stored everything down in there cellars or war houses those are houses built to hold the soldier things but they could hold anything so soon they were ready for the siege of the town but three days later an army of 100 men arrived to help support the castle but there were now 507 men in the prisoner side plus thirty horsemen they got ready to for the siege they marched forward for the camp and were ready for anything to happen  but it took awhile to get to the town and beat them into the castle they had just heard more men were going to sneak into the castle so the prisoners stopped them then they started shooting at the wall with cannon boom!!!!! Boom!!!!! Then they answered with rifle shot soon a full out shoot load shoot had came but with full force  pow pow boom!!!! Soon that day was over but the enemy hadn't given up yet but they still were fighting for there town they fired high in the air and it rained down on them but samuel was to quick gave them a pelt of rifle and cannon shot’s that rained in the sky it blew up three cannons up on the enemy side but just the same there came more cannon shot from them soon they started to loose powder and cannon ball’s the town however was in better condition for a fight with well trained soldiers and better gun’s not old gun’s but brand new gun’s they were ready for anything quickly samuel got his army on every side of town he put cannons on the sensitive sides and quickly ordered them to fire but as soon as they fired 200 redcoats charged them they fought at their best but they lost 3 of there ten cannon’s and most of their powder and cannonball’s so they stopped shooting with cannons and started to shoot with their muskets and pistols pow pow!!!! Went guns and pistols soon there thirty horsemen came for order’s there order were simple try get into the fort and grab everything you can carry soon they were doing exactly that all the redcoats were shooting at samuel and his men so there was no resistance quick as they came in they were unloading their horses and one wagon they stole it had powder musket cannon balls and a couple swords pistols musket balls soon most of their men except generals and lower men were armed with rifles samuel chose two pistols and a sword soon the attack was renewed with energy samuel with and three platoons samuels platoons had about thirty men in each platoon samuel and his ninety men asked if they surrendered there captain yelled never as soon his words were out he and most of his corporals luteniants were all shot and quickly the white flag was raised and samuel and his raised army of 656 men talked the terms of peace over and they quickly agreed the war WAS OVER!!!!!! Hats were everywhere people cheered the women and children were all escorted quickly to the town and they also celebrated now casualties were about 99 on each side 

Redwall 2

The rotter’s the shrew had seen where checking there camp equipment though four stuck out they were slightly large and look more like a otter than a rat the first carried a double bladed battle axe the next had larger ears than the rest and one was split down the middle he carried a long staff and on the end there was a small axe blade on the other side a spear tip on the top another spear tip designed for stabbing the third carried a sword some may call it a claymore it had basket hilt they all carried packs on there back the fourth who had a larger pack was smaller than the previous three was black carried a sickle shaped sword

Redwall

A shrew peering out of the bushes watched as enmass vermin all painted blue marched forward towards the end he saw creatures that struck fear into his heart they were a paler blue than normal thoughts raced in his rotters half rat half otter they where large armed with axes and swords and birchbark shields they were known for their ferocity and ruthlessness the shrew shook his head he had strapped to his side a rapier blood still on it and multi colored headband on he disappeared into woods smoke coming from a burning village a few kilometers off to the north

Now he is finally moving to bigger thing she is going to start his own hospital, They bought some l;and from some Catholics for the exact amount of money they had twenty five thousand dollars in american dollars i guess dont ask me why because this is in Peru butthen they needed a house. Which they got it was in really bad shape so they hired a bunch of workers to work a bunch on it they liuterally had to raise the whole ceiling which is a massive job the railing where destroyed from termites the stairs where barealy usabul but they didnt wporry about it yet because after a while they whent back to germany to hire people for to work with them at the hospital. 

Principals office

Sorry said Jeff maybe we can just leave no we can’t even more trouble we could be kicked off the team they sat in silence for a while. Thinking about that hockey was a big thing for them the principle came back and said I called your parents they’ll be here soon ok said Lewis they left and went to the Detention room Jeff was a daredevil and while lewis did some work that the principle was making them do. Jeff snuck out the door and past the secretary for the principal's office he did it by throwing something out behind her while her head was down and while she turned he managed to get out of the Offices and he sprinted down the hall he checked his watch 4 minutes till the coach came back to get his camera back he got to chris’s locker and opened it the camera and tripod fell out he grabbed them put them into the camera bag that was in the locker he started racing back 2 minutes left he saw the coaches bus pull up (his team stayed in town for awhile and he came back too get his camera in the bus) he quickly walked up to the door and went to the front desk Jeff made it back and snuck into the office this time in a mad dash when the secretary wasn’t looking he made into the principals office and sat down the coach and principal walked in a few seconds later he quickly talked up.




TO BE CONTINUED

Almost the end

Why streaker and Bear said Jeff Bear and Streaker are very competitive and Streaker is Captain of the team if he doesn’t win this year as Captain he doesn’t get another chance until his turn comes around again. Ok said Jeff know Why is very easy Chris because he wants to keep his popularity and Bear and Streaker because they want to win the Championship this year. Let's start with Chris White he’s in the science lab he will be there because he and his gang are there Chris white had a 7 person gang they were sorta bullied though they were more like science bullies they were bigger than most students they bullied some students like the Hockey players who mess up or something bad like that Jeff and Lewis arrived at the science lab Chris was there along with 2 other gang members Lewis walked up Well Well said Chris Lewis and Jeffrey its Jeff said Jeff Well whatever said Chris what do you want dweebs we just wanted to ask some Questions said Lewis ok ask away where you in the visitors bench after or during the periods during the hockey game said Lewis well actually I was well… why said Lewis none of your business said Chris Jeff and Lewis walked back out into the hallway Lewis said let's check his locker they quickly found his locker and something was off there was a bulge in the locker it was slight but they noticed it the lockers are always kept unlocked but if your quick you can get in and out without being caught Lewis quickly opened it up and Jeff quickly started examining the dent but a tripod and camera hit his head he rubbed his head and quickly shut the locker and examined the bag there was a camera and tripod both black with Raptor Markings they quickly turned on the camera it needs a password muttered Lewis Jeff tried a few random ones but Lewis quickly stopped him there’s probably a security alarm on that thing lets stop and put it back then when the coach get’s back we can get him to see if it is his said Lewis let's put it back and then get the principles permission to check it out they quickly put it back and headed to the principal's office they knocked and the principal said come on in Lewis quickly explained what they where doing they also explained why they suspected Chris White then something bad happened they had 10 minutes to get the camera when Jeff said something terrible sir we have some more information why we want to convict Chris we opened his locker up and inside it was a tripod and camera the camera had a password and we couldn’t figure out if he took it said Jeff ok- wait you opened up his locker without anyone's permission yes up wait uh yeah we did said Jeff ok you boys stay here your in for some big trouble stay here the principle left and Lewis said nice going Jeff know we can’t solve the case and we can’t get the camera back

TO BE CONTINUED

End of the game start of the mystery

after the last two periods the score was 2-1 Panthers won but almost tied the Raptors went on to the losers bracket. But the Panthers went on to face another team as Lewis and Jeff came out as the player congratulated each other slapped back and high fiving. Jeff yelled over the roars of players to Lewis mom said we have to leave early grab your stuff and let's go OKAY! Yelled Lewis as they were walking out to the car when someone started yelling about a lost camera. Lewis ran over recognizing the coach of the Raptors he was ranting about the Panthers stealing his video camera so he couldn’t review the plays I WANT EVERY KID ARRESTED THAT WORE A PANTHER UNIFORM yelled the Coach who was called Mr Sanchez Pls sir said a guard lets go and talk in my office so we don’t disturb someone DISTURB yelled the coach I SHOW DISTURBED THIS MAY HAVE RUINED ARE SEASON the guard finally convinced him to be quiet and talk about it but the coach didn’t come with the guard but couldn’t come into the building because he didn’t have a card Lewis came up and said I can solve mysteries I and my brother could find the camera for you? Said Lewis Jeff walked up and said yeah we can find it for you? Your panther players said Mr. Sanchez, why would you help me? We like solving mysteries said Lewis we can actually find it

Mystery deepens

 Jeff walked up and said yeah we can find it for you? Your panther players said Mr. Sanchez, why would you help me? We like solving mysteries said Lewis we can actually find it how are you going to get into the school we have student IDs we can get in ok well I can’t come with said Sanchez but I’ll be back in 1 hour if you find it I’ll give you ten bucks Thanks but we- Jeff said but Lewis interrupted we work for free after Mr Sanchez left they started back but there mom came over and said guys I wanted to leave early come on we to get going Lewis said mom is it ok if we stay here for about an hour we have something we need to inside ok but be back before dinner ok thanks mom said Lewis Jeff opened the door and showed his student ID and they were in they went into the hockey rink Ok let's start from the basics he said he was using a tripod and camera in the Visitors bench so let's search the area they searched it thoroughly Jeff suddenly yelled hey I found a something that a students ID lets see who is it wow what said, Lewis!? Chris White wow said Lewis that guy is like the most popular kid in school anyway said Jeff why was he in the visitor's bench area yeah WAIT! Said Lewis his popularity is mostly because he is on the Hockey team as Equipment manager and people like hanging out with Championship Hockey players well said Jeff he isn’t a hockey player yeah whatever like start using what dad said Lewis the w’s Why and Who first those well first suspects are 

• Chris White 

• Bear

• Streaker

The start of the game

JEFF!!!! Yelled Lewis his older brother by 3 months it's almost time to go Alright yelled Jeff I’m coming lost my hockey stick! Ok just hurry up a few minutes later Jeff came tumbling down the stairs a big duffel bag and hockey stick falling on him I’m ok He yelled his mom came running in hearing the crash. Are you sure that's a long fall I’m good mom said Jeff Lewis came running in and start rushing them out to the car we late for are hockey game lets go! He said don’t worry we won’t be too late it only 5 minutes away said their mom on the road they slipped into their uniforms Black and Light red they played for the Plumville Panthers a hockey team they were playing a tough team it was the first game of the season they were played the Redington Raptors when they arrived parents and players and some fans the panthers were playing on there home rink flashes of red and black flashed over the court as the teams warmed up Jeff and Lewis where a Dynamic Duo Jeff was a very good puck handler Lewis was fast and could flash all round the rink after 10 minutes of warming up the game the two points came up and fist bumping and got into hockey stances Jeff was playing point Lewis was on the bench he would go out when the Raptors were tired the puck dropped and Jeff managed to get it too there good friend Jerry Rangerton Jerry was bowled over by a much bigger player and the game went on after the 1st period flashes and video started recording after the first period Lewis went out and Jeff went in another player nicknamed bear was on point he bowled over the other point passed back to lewis and Lewis passed to another player and then back to Lewis who circled the net and SCORED! The score went to 1-0.

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