the general jumped again he pulled out his saber and started to fight he swung his saber he fought hard finally he had his last swing he pulled him self together and swung hard and killed him he looked at his men he yelled charge" and they started to run with his men he swung his saber at 7 other men and then he shot his relvovler at the commander then he got to the other side of the felid and the union started to run
THE END
WHOAH. A pretty riveting story. End to end action.
ReplyDeleteGood story! Capital letters at the beginning of the sentences would be a great addition!
ReplyDeleteGood story! Capital letters at the beginning of the sentences would be a great addition!
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